Date: 05/18/12 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
I liked the story even though some people didn't.
It is easy to say a bad thing against someone when they are not writing anything. I tried to read there stories but there was none.
Keep up the good work. I hope you continue this story
Date: 01/06/12 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think folks do get a little harsh in reviews. There are a lot of themes here I like, especially the humiliation of being forced to dress up just like his little sister. That said, you could definitely use some editing, it can be a bit hard to follow and appreciate the good stuff otherwise.
Date: 11/02/11 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, it's me again... I'm sorry to tell you again, but your stories suck. Lots of spelling and grammar errors, stupid things in the plot,... Have you tried writing stories for toddlers before? Maybe that suits you better.
Author's Response: WOW why dont you tell me how you feel and don't sugar coat it. I haven't read any of your stories, but i'm trying i hope you have a open mind instead of just aloud mouth. But thanks for your input NOT! I did just add chapter Two maybe you can share if you enjoy it better.