Reviews For Tainted Souls
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Reviewer: Emily Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/28/16 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: A new Fate

Promising start

Reviewer: Person42 Signed Report
Date: 02/26/16 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: A new Fate

The formatting is odd, seems like it cuts off a little before it's supposed to and heads to a new line. Other than that, there are a handful of spelling errors scattered about (though it's to be expected without superb spell-check options). This story seems somewhat familiar, too... well, still, I hope you get around to updating it somewhat soon!

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/24/16 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: A new Fate

ROFG the League of legends reference xD
Cant wait for more :D

Reviewer: TmC Signed Report
Date: 02/24/16 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: A new Fate

I'm a simple guy. I see league. I press like.

Memes aside. It was a good start. Slightly generic for the genre but there's nothing wrong with that.

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/24/16 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: A new Fate interesting start.. And fyi, when using measurements it shouldn't be three (times) five but rather three (by) five....

Exp....2x4 is two by four...👍

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. And thanks for the advise.^^

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