Date: 02/26/16 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: A new Fate
The formatting is odd, seems like it cuts off a little before it's supposed to and heads to a new line. Other than that, there are a handful of spelling errors scattered about (though it's to be expected without superb spell-check options). This story seems somewhat familiar, too... well, still, I hope you get around to updating it somewhat soon!
Date: 02/24/16 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: A new Fate
Hmm....an interesting start.. And fyi, when using measurements it shouldn't be three (times) five but rather three (by) five....
Exp....2x4 is two by four...👍
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. And thanks for the advise.^^