Reviews For Patti
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Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/27/15 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is so funny and cute. Please continue with this one.

Reviewer: Hiei_The_Little_Tomboy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 06/30/13 03:55 am Title: Chapter 3


i really love this story, i hope youŽll continue it!

greatings Hiei_The_Little_Tomboy

Reviewer: deafweasel Signed starstar Report
Date: 04/17/13 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

continue, but make barry/carrie more mature, and everybody less abusive. he needs to be more grown up that would make it much better.

Reviewer: hoselover Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/31/12 01:00 am Title: Chapter 3

Very good story. Hopefully you go on. I am looking forward to the further growth of the breast due to the estrogen etc. Reaching cup B / C will lead to new challenges at home ith the brothers and dad. Also interesting will be how to deal with it at school. The new Barrie will not excist and this is Miley already so Barrie (or the real Miley) will be asked to the sister and investigated again. Discovered will be the females parts and therefore she needs to wear female cloths again.
Only the diaper stuff could be left out from here. Just let her grow as a girl between the chearleaders and in small dresses.

Reviewer: Baby_Girl_69ing Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/18/12 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 3

I read all three parts and i hope you continue this with another chapter.

Reviewer: Baby_Girl_69ing Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/18/12 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

part 2 was even better than the first part thank you....please continue

Reviewer: Baby_Girl_69ing Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/18/12 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed the story. Thank you please continue

Reviewer: darwen98 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/26/12 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1

enjoying your story

Reviewer: missanonymusgirl Signed half-star Report
Date: 10/16/11 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm really sorry, but this story is horrible. Lots and lots of spelling errors make it completely unreadable. Also, these kids are 10 - 13 years old and talking about having blowjobs? Horrible story.

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