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Reviewer: Mr5yy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/24/18 08:28 am Title: Chapter 3

It's a pretty good story so far. Maybe an update in the future?

Reviewer: Deffy Signed Report
Date: 05/04/16 01:22 am Title: Chapter 1

So far a really exciting story, I really hope you finish this :)

Reviewer: RyanTheWriter Signed Report
Date: 04/30/16 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm...I'm not into magical stories, however, I might enjoy this story. Keep it up, please....

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/19/16 10:32 am Title: Chapter 3

Very cute!

Reviewer: okieohio Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/16/16 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Well keep going. What are the witches going to do to him? I hope to find out.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 02/05/16 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love it, bet he won't go with a dare play again, I love these stories, please do write more soon.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/04/16 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

Cute,but on the short side!

Reviewer: BlindingFire Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/03/16 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Maybe I've been reading too much Misaania, but these little snippets feel more like a tiny bite of a chapter than a chapter. Ending on a cliffhanger is one thing, but it's entirely unsatisfying to read through 2 chapters of a promising story and barely get through a single complete thought.

I would recommend saving up 3 or more of these "chapters" and submitting them as one whole chapter instead of piecemeal like this, even if it takes longer.

Reviewer: ElizahAT Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/03/16 02:25 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh geez... he is doom. hahaha!

Reviewer: ElizahAT Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/02/16 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1

more more please... definitely get me interested to know more. :)

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/02/16 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice! Great start and good grammar! Just make the chapters a bit longer and it'll be perfect!

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