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Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstar Report
Date: 12/21/17 03:22 am Title: Chapter 7

That was a very messy story sadly.

Reviewer: Emily Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/17/16 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Rather poorly written, it all goes very fast with little to explanation. Short chapters, several grammar mistakes and typos.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/16/16 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

A real deep storyline! I still am finding the storyline interesting.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 01/15/16 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

Interesting three chapters

Author's Response: Thank you. I am finding it difficult to go from a 1st person to a 3rd person in writing. It's a lot harder than it looks, this writing business.

Reviewer: Wonko The Sane1 Signed Report
Date: 01/12/16 05:29 am Title: Chapter 1

I swear if this is another mislabeled "realistic" gender change involving magic or aliens or gods or some shit....

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