That was a very messy story sadly.
Rather poorly written, it all goes very fast with little to explanation. Short chapters, several grammar mistakes and typos.
A real deep storyline! I still am finding the storyline interesting.
Interesting three chaptersAuthor's Response: Thank you. I am finding it difficult to go from a 1st person to a 3rd person in writing. It's a lot harder than it looks, this writing business.
I swear if this is another mislabeled "realistic" gender change involving magic or aliens or gods or some shit....