Date: 09/11/16 06:29 pm Title: Cheerleader snoop and changes at school
Grammar is terrible, it sounds like an 8 year old wrote this story.
Author's Response: as I have told people before I have a disability when comes to my grammar thanks for your review I need a proof editor which I hope will be with me soon
Date: 01/28/16 05:55 am Title: Cheerleader snoop and changes at school
Well.... Let's see. Major problems with grammar, descriptions, and transitions but good plot. One thing that bugs me is that the whole point of a tg is the reaction that the MC produces. When you hangs their memory, it's just another story that you will find on any other site.
Author's Response: I am getting a proof editor very soon to help besides someone else on this Thank you