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Reviewer: Ktech Signed Report
Date: 09/11/16 06:29 pm Title: Cheerleader snoop and changes at school

Grammar is terrible, it sounds like an 8 year old wrote this story.

Author's Response: as I have told people before I have a disability when comes to my grammar thanks for your review I need a proof editor which I hope will be with me soon

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed Report
Date: 09/10/16 08:29 pm Title: America falls to Women Superior Party

You should come join us on Discord, but up to you. *Link to chat can be found in Disccussions.

Author's Response: will try it later on

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/28/16 05:55 am Title: Cheerleader snoop and changes at school

Well.... Let's see. Major problems with grammar, descriptions, and transitions but good plot. One thing that bugs me is that the whole point of a tg is the reaction that the MC produces. When you hangs their memory, it's just another story that you will find on any other site.

Author's Response: I am getting a proof editor very soon to help besides someone else on this Thank you

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 01/18/16 12:11 pm Title: Was our cheerleader snooping planned


Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/10/16 07:46 pm Title: Cheerleader snoop and changes at school

Not bad, but still needs some improvements...

Author's Response: thank you jacks i am still learning but my sister help me with this one

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