Reviews For Spark
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Reviewer: aquerty Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/13/16 12:51 am Title: Escape

Wow been a while, glad to see your back updating this story, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: grabber_blue Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/12/16 01:44 pm Title: Escape

Loved it. Found some part funny and cute :p
Can't wait for more been waiting forever for an update it feels like x_x
Love it though

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/12/16 04:32 am Title: Escape

This is punchy and awesome! I can't wait to read more! I really want to see what's going to happen next... An exciting beginning.

Reviewer: grabber_blue Signed Report
Date: 04/22/16 03:08 am Title: Undesired Assertions

When will there be more

Reviewer: aquerty Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/08/16 01:47 am Title: We're in this

Cool story you've been very discriptive in your making it very easy to read, but it feels like it's moving a bit fast. Also you started the story of without much information of the world, given the Mc is doing all the work all together I enjoyed it and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/06/16 07:03 am Title: Undesired Assertions

Good, but slightly confusing. Try having your characters explain the situation in a more understandable way. I often have to reread entire sections to find out what they really mean.

Reviewer: HowieN Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/04/16 10:37 pm Title: We're in this

Okay, seems quite interesting so far. A couple of spelling errors here and there, but everyone has a few.
I'll keep an eye on this, thanks for sharing it.

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