Date: 01/05/16 07:22 am Title: 1927
First of all, this is an absolutely brilliant concept for a story, and the writing is good too, which makes me a little bit sad that this story could be GREAT. I think if your chapters were a little bit longer, and maybe if the main character stayed in these time periods for a longer period than a day, maybe a week or even a month so he can get acclimated to each environment before being forcibly thrust into an earlier period, it would have more of a mental and emotional impact on him, and we would get to see what kind of a person he truly is underneath. Either way, though, this is a fine story, and one of the best ones on this site. Favorited.