Date: 07/06/17 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 20
Ahh no it's ended! Please please please make this into a series, it reminds me of Angel (the Buffy spin-off) but far more sexier! All she needs is a few more sexy sidekicks :) and it would be lovely to see how the relationship between the pair turns out - was it love? Or just lust. I need to know! Lol x
Author's Response: Thank you so much! There will be more stories coming featuring Aeriel & Co, and maybe other characters in this universe.
Date: 07/03/17 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
Hmm, things seem to be looking up! Medusa ex machina? Still, a moderately well-executed plot (she'll get better), with promotion potential, and Aeriel gets the desk.
Lastly, I like that you've been remembering the el suffixes. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 07/02/17 11:19 am Title: Introduction
Your witty writing, but especially the comment about the banks clinched a five start rating. Until that one I was just quietly giggling here and there, but that made me laugh out loud.
Apart from that it is a very enjoyable and entertaining read and well written. I like the main characters Holly and Aeriel a lot.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 10/05/16 02:28 am Title: Introduction
Oh my god(Or Maybe Devil in this story). This story is amazing I'm so into it that i was hysterical when i reached the end because i just wanna keep reading, that's how well this story is crafted Thank You for it and i sure hope there's an update soon.
P.S. I made this account just to comment my opinion
Date: 01/05/16 07:28 am Title: Chapter 4
I just started reading this fic, but I already now that if this isn't my absolute favorite TG fic on this site, it's number two. Your story is AMAZING. It's extremely well written. Aiden/Aeriel, Holly, Veshnial, and all the periphery characters feel like real people, which is rare in a story of this kind since most TG stories are self inserts. Your jokes and sense of humor is genuinely funny and witty, and your world building is surprisingly creative, and I say that as someone who reads a lot of fantasy and is very discriminating about world building. Your story fucking rocks, dude. It's also very sexy and human. Kudos.
Author's Response: Oh man thank you so much. You don't know how much this means to me. This gave me a serious confidence boost! =D
Date: 01/01/16 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
Glad to see this back! Your writing has a lot of charm and humor and there's really good emotional weight to the characters so I think this story is fast becoming one of my favorite stories on this site? The smut's fun too ofc.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! This really means a lot to me
Date: 12/17/15 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh. That is interesting. Would definitely not be surprised if "That" bastard was the source of it all. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: We'll see! Christmas rush has delayed my work, but I'll have a new one up soon!
Date: 12/15/15 06:23 pm Title: Introduction
One question, I played Corruption of Champions and Trials in Tainted Space. Are they the same to this story, aren't?
Author's Response: Thank you, though I'm not sure what you're asking. They're completely different settings.
Date: 12/14/15 04:59 am Title: Introduction
Loving this story to death... And beyond! Great balance between different directions, yet most new chapters contain surprises. Excellent writing style, not many "say what?" moments so far. This is one of those rare cases where I'm inclined to tell someone else, "I know you're not into TG stories, but you should check out this one."
Author's Response: Thank you very much, that means a lot to me!
Date: 12/14/15 12:41 am Title: Chapter 11
I liked that chapter. That was a good chapter :D. I really can't see much fault in the story thus far. Some people might but I can't. Though, I have one question. Holly mentioned fiery eyes and horns. Does she mean that Aeriel went all demonic in the middle of the bar for everyone to see? That would definitely draw some unwanted attention. Can't wait to see what else is in store! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: She did~ But Holly also mentioned that she didn't think anyone else noticed. Thank you!
Date: 12/13/15 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
Can we... NOT have her become a superhero? It's too cliche... We already have Paragon Verse and Brave New World...?!
Author's Response: Don't worry, it's kind of a silly in-joke with a friend who wanted her to become a low-tier superhero who f**** her girlfriend in between stopping crime. I can safely say she WON'T become a superhero.
Date: 12/12/15 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my, so interesting. I hope you don't randomly disappear and let me hanging, cause you surely hooked me here.
Author's Response: Well, we're approaching the end of what I've had pre-written, so things might slow down. But disappear? Probably not!
Date: 12/12/15 06:05 am Title: Chapter 9
Nice! You're dedicated to this story. I can't wait till the next chapter gets approved. It's a pain, I know. I love it when the story includes orgies that have people screwing each other until pass out! This is great. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I've been working on it for a while, it's nice to get it out there.
Date: 12/10/15 04:49 am Title: Chapter 8
Well, I don't want to make it a habit of commenting on every chapter you post, but nice . I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the two of them explore Aeriel's new powers and each other :3
Author's Response: Please, feel free! Thank you!
Date: 12/08/15 05:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Dead Like Me is the shit. You've got some good taste, man. Also, this was a really fun chapter, though for Holly's sake I hope she gets some more action in return. Kind of a bad deal if you summon a succubus to only pleasure her.
Author's Response: Oh there's definitely some reciprocation coming, if you know what I mean.
Date: 12/06/15 05:46 pm Title: Introduction
This is really fun so far. I always appreciate "cosmic bureaucracy" type stories, and this scratches that itch really well so far. I hope we get more of that as "New Duties" goes on.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes I've always enjoyed things of that nature as well, Dead Like Me chief among them.
Date: 12/06/15 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
The concept of summoning a demon who knows less about what is going on then you do is quite interesting. My only complaint is that you ended the chapter where you did, but that is definitely excused by the speed with which you added it.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. The ending is a little awkward yes, but I think/hope it flows well into the start of the next chapter
Date: 12/06/15 03:39 am Title: Chapter 3
A pretty good start so far. As a huge lesbian, I've always been interested in lesbian succubi stories, of which there are unfortunately few. Throwing in some magic makes it neat. One comment though, just from a personal perspective. G is a really big cup size and a lot of people beyond DD (in the american sizes) opt for breast reduction surgery because their breasts can cause severe back pain. Magic can be an excuse for a lot of things though.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes I know G is big, but succubi aren't your average girls, hehe.