Thank You!!! So Much Better post Edit. Updated the Score to a 5.٩(◕u◕)۶-Edit: No using cool Japanese letters for Emojis.
Great stuff. I’m more interested in Maria and her grandmother’s journey, but I have a strong suspicion that all roads lead back to the Mansion eventually. Where else will they look for answers?
better grammar on 2 & #.
Well done! I'm definitely intrigued to see where this will go!
love this new chapter! really hoping you choose to continue with this. would love to see more from both Maria and Susie.
I'm curious and I thought the bunny ears and tail were going to be real! Anyway well done,a great storyline.
Atta boy, now you know what to do, just go with it!
Yes,I like to read more!
It was a good story. Make it a series.