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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/31/20 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh hell yes please continue! You've done an excellent job so far, and set yourself up for many side and sub stories involving the other characters. Thank you.

Reviewer: gothicshark Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/29/20 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank You!!! So Much Better post Edit. Updated the Score to a 5.

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-Edit: No using cool Japanese letters for Emojis.

Reviewer: Faye Kistry Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/29/20 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

Great stuff. I’m more interested in Maria and her grandmother’s journey, but I have a strong suspicion that all roads lead back to the Mansion eventually. Where else will they look for answers?

Reviewer: gothicshark Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/29/20 11:54 am Title: Chapter 3

better grammar on 2 & #.

Reviewer: Slipstream Signed Report
Date: 05/29/20 09:24 am Title: Chapter 3

Well done! I'm definitely intrigued to see where this will go!

Reviewer: Arcade Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/29/20 07:55 am Title: Chapter 3

love this new chapter! really hoping you choose to continue with this. would love to see more from both Maria and Susie.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/12/15 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm curious and I thought the bunny ears and tail were going to be real! Anyway well done,a great storyline.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 12/04/15 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Atta boy, now you know what to do, just go with it!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/04/15 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes,I like to read more!

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/04/15 06:02 am Title: Chapter 1

It was a good story. Make it a series.

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