Date: 12/06/15 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Switch
Decent story. But I'm confused about the reason behind the transformation. Sprinkling a vial of liquid isn't very explanatory. It's good, but still really confusing.
Author's Response: That was a lie they told him to explain how the guy made them switch without the girls permission. However the girl was in on it to so the real cause of the swap is still unknown.