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Reviewer: Selvanius Signed Report
Date: 12/06/15 05:22 am Title: Chapter 1: Unpaid Bills

It's... way too short. I don't what to say because it's so darn short. Aim for at least 1000 words per chapter. Also, you should put some more description into your writing. I'll put a rating in when it gets better.

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice I will work on your points

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 11/29/15 11:04 am Title: Chapter 2: Troublesome Visitors

Too short,but interesting!

Author's Response: I will try on the next chapter to increase the length thanks for the advice :)

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