Date: 12/16/15 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 19
Past the sexy transformation part and into the story. I am enjoying it a lot but your writing for changing bodies just hits home so delightfully for me. I could read one pagers of your descriptions of feminization and be a very happy lady. - A
Date: 12/15/15 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've never been a big girl myself until I had my kids I was a B cup and my mantra was always. Anyone over a B cup is abnormal now I'm a C cup maybe I should have kept quiet lol.
As much as I'm enjoying this story I'm finding very strong echoes of Jenni in here. While I was studying English in High School we were taught a great deal about narrative voices. I hope that you see this as constructive criticism I'm hoping that this is not going to be too much of a rehash of Jenni.
Author's Response: Haha. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Well, yes there are certainly echoes of Jenni in here. Especially, in the recent chapters. The beginning is quite a bit different, but now, yes. Bear with me for awhile because this one will end up different. However, there always will be a similar theme in most of my stories because I write about what turns me on fantasy wise. Take care, Bob.
Date: 12/10/15 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 17
A malicious entity changes a cocky, macho guy into an oversexed bimbo. Check.
The target is made to feel extreme humiliation and arousal at the same time. Check.
The target is unreasonably attracted only to masculine he-men. Check.
A "nice guy" befriends the target and acts as both benefactor and kinky dominant. Check.
Over-the-top physical ineptitude. Check.
Yup, it's a Superbob story!
Keep it up. :P
Author's Response: Lol...I guess I'm getting kind of predictable. However, I wouldn't have it any other way. :)
Date: 12/07/15 04:39 am Title: Chapter 15
dear superbob in as story there a test and the time lime as not right be case they do not give her the food that she have to have if she have the food she may make the time lime but without the food she have to go and get the food and that take time to do that so she wood not make the time line and that as not right yjing to do
Author's Response: More insightful words have not been spoken.
Date: 12/04/15 02:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Heather still has all her previous knowledge and skills. She will become ill if she says her male name or talks about her life but she still has the underlying knowledge. She could never claim credit for her degree but she could start a new record that would gradually over come the old. Clothing might be a problem but as long as it is blatantly sexy and revealing it doesn't have to be totally without class.
Date: 12/03/15 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 13
dear superbob in your story it said her as stuck as her but if she can find what they use to mate her at can be unden but the odd as 40%/60% but as time go by the odd of her do it go down other I do not know how I like as story
Date: 12/01/15 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
You have read all the same stories that I have. I guess as sadists they don't want her to be happy as a female. They want her to be upset but compelled to be an enthusiastic playmate while hating it every minute. You had better give her a strong suicide revulsion.
Date: 12/01/15 01:25 am Title: Chapter 1
All that is needed now is a grid of electrodes in her brain. In a drugged hypnotic state, measure her male brain response to a hot female image or to a man having his type of sex with a woman. Finally fill her mouth with a moving pulsing penis replica and stimulate her previous erotic response so that her brain help but crave performing oral sex and then be programmed to almost involuntarily open her legs and be taken. You can leave the grid in her bran with the connector buried for future programming.
Author's Response: I'm almost done with the next chapter and you aren't terribly far off...great minds think alike.
Date: 11/24/15 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
"There was nothing that would break into the drywall..." Ummm, what kind of drywall is this? Just punch it, idiot! My 10-year-old niece put her elbow through my brother's wall by accident. You telling me a grown adult can't do it on purpose? Other than that, this is fun if a little silly, but silly is okay sometimes. ;)
Author's Response: Have you ever tried to punch drywall in an older building in NYC? You will break your hand...it has a million little boards behind it. On a new building in suburbia you could blow on drywall and break through it. Maybe I should have explained that. :) Glad you are enjoying it.
Date: 11/21/15 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
Your female antagonist statement that she increased 3 cup sizes doesn't match the sizes given. But I have never been that size. The story is a great beginning.
Author's Response: Thank you! From D to DD to DDD to E. Maybe, I'm wrong...bra sizes are a complicated thing :)