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Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/25/15 12:47 am Title: Monday Morning: Strange in a Stranger Land

Well this is an interesting tale... Looking forward to what comes next... XD

Reviewer: Denkkar Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/25/15 12:19 am Title: Monday Morning: Strange in a Stranger Land

LOL, it's not as if things could go more wrong.

Reviewer: Archer Signed Report
Date: 11/18/15 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1: Yochlal Just Wants to Sleep

Hmm, I think the only real problem is that a lot of the dialog between the three friends gets hard to follow (like when they're in the car) because it's just dialog without any narrative assistance, like adding [blank] said. Otherwise quite well done.

Reviewer: Ellipsis Signed Report
Date: 11/18/15 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1: Yochlal Just Wants to Sleep

Oh, god damn it, Carl!

Reviewer: ILoveWafflesXX Signed Report
Date: 11/17/15 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Yochlal Just Wants to Sleep

This story seems really interesting, despite the 'demon being summoned and fucking up everything' cliche. Still, pretty good.

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