Date: 11/17/15 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Decent story, interesting premise explorered well, solid writing basics. Normally don't go for identity death, but this was enjoyable. Didn't turn me on, but then the content doesn't really play to my specific fetish so that's fine.
I can't really see where it could go from here, though? The tg seems to be done for the main character. That said I'll be interested to see whatever it is that you do with this world next.