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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/28/19 04:30 am Title: Ch. 1: Introducing Me

Baq, if the girls you know in real life are even half as sexy as the ones in your stories I can see why you don't have much time to write. You da man!

Author's Response: You have no idea. I wish I could show these girls... -Baq

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/27/19 04:58 am Title: Ch. 1: Introducing Me

Baq, I really like this story. It's a little slower paced than some of your others. The only part I didn't like was the identity death for Scott. I think it's ok to change his mannerisms, speech, muscle memory, sexual attraction, but keep Scott's mind in there somewhere.
The 'hobby' of changing other guys seemed a little lame. Brooke came off as a robotic bimbo. I think a better ending would have been for the girls to go out clubbing and find a guy or two to have sex with. Brooke needs to learn about all the benefits of being a woman. And I think with your literary skills that you could do a great job of describing a lurid night on the town and in bed.
I think your description of Brooke was spot-on with all the details necessary for me to build my own Brooke. Someday I'd like to find pictures that match the women you create.
Overall great story and as always I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: This was the first story I ever published on this site, before I really found my voice that I know you've come to love. I felt identity death was necessary to this story at the time, and I'll stand by that choice because I haven't often utilized that writing technique in my stories since this was published almost four years ago. As for the pictures, I have images in mind for each girl I create based on girls I know in real life, but out of their privacy and my own I'm going to refrain from posting them. Thanks as always for reviewing, Elron! -Baq

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 03/18/16 07:14 pm Title: Ch. 10: A New Beginning

Why would anyone want to be a guy? That would really suck having a dick always bulging the front of your pants. I like my female shape, and how my clothes fit.

Author's Response: I apologize for taking over two years to respond, my account wasn't active for a long time. "Why would anyone want to be a guy," you ask. Well, I am a guy, and I would say it certainly has its perks. However, there have been many times in my life over the last several years where I've thought that it would be amazing to be a girl like Brooke in the story, having that type of figure and curves... Oh well, nothing I can do about it and, like Scott, I love my life as a guy. It's just something I've often thought about.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 12/15/15 08:55 pm Title: Ch. 10: A New Beginning

I would surely have a great time playing a game like that, the expressions would be worth a million.

Author's Response: It's been nearly three years since your review, and I apologize for the delay in my response. I'd love to play a game like that too, hopefully with the same result!

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 11/18/15 03:04 pm Title: Ch. 10: A New Beginning

Poor Scot, she fell into the trap all the better for her now she knows good luck in your new life.p

Author's Response: Scott didn't know what was going on, but she's better off as the beautiful and busty Brooke.

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