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Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/11/16 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1

A fun read!

Reviewer: Krv1987 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/13/15 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really fun story

Reviewer: StephAD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/13/15 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heh. Are you saying this is gonna happen to me if I don't comment? I'm not quite sure how to feel about that, Desert. Either way, nice story. I may or may not have giggled....

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/13/15 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG! This is really good! Not many stories begin with self discovery of their bodies!

Reviewer: Sylvia Moriah Signed Report
Date: 11/13/15 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

i know right? xD

commenting is like telling everyone what kind of kinks get you off :P could it get anymore awakward? ;)

just playing lol. not a script for a short story, certainly had an interesting flow. about that last comment though... is that the guy-gone-girl,guy-turned-girl or simply guy-likes-guy-roommate?

Reviewer: KawaiiQueenMe Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/13/15 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1

i wont leave a comment!...shit... oh god theres a rating too... NOOOOO! ohhh shiiiiiiit...a33;a33;a33;a33;a33;

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