Date: 11/01/15 07:20 pm Title: Epilogue
I loved the story, will you be writing more?
Author's Response: In terms of short stories like this, maybe not for a little while, but I wouldn't be averse to trying again with what I've learned from this go-around sometime in the future. If you mean in general, I am still in the middle of writing Uplifted, a longer, science-fiction themed piece. The next chapter will be up tomorrow, so if you liked what I've written here, you may want to give that a shot.
Date: 11/01/15 06:55 pm Title: Story 3 - A Penny For Your Thoughts
This story definitely gained steam for me in the latter half. Wasn't really feeling the first sections, but the sweet story between Emma and Lizzy, and then Lily and Desiree, big fan of that kind of interaction. Very well done for a short story.
Author's Response: I went into this blind, and sort of found the story as I went along, so I'm glad it came together by the end. Thanks!
Date: 10/31/15 10:47 pm Title: Bound
I liked this a lot, but I think you can do better. I liked the overstory more than any of the shorter ones. I think they were a bit too short - I couldn't get into them, so they fell flat both as porn and as horror. They felt a bit hopeless, lacking any conflict or any hope for the main character.
What worked... Well, the promise of fast updates and a finish date had me checking the story daily, so that was a total success. I really enjoyed the final tf scene, and the epilogue. Overall, I liked it but didn't get off while reading it.
Author's Response: That's totally fair. I wanted to see if I could manage the same with a short, short story, so it's good to hear what worked and what didn't. Thanks for reading, and hopefully you'll get there next time.