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Reviewer: ElizahAT Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/10/16 05:24 am Title: The new flat

Hey. not bad. I understand the story. So keep it going ok. Your english will improve gradually. :)

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 10/09/15 12:37 am Title: The new flat

Interesting start,a lot of spelling errors.

Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/09/15 12:07 am Title: The new flat

Interesting start, but I recommend using a dictionary or thesaurus to help you out. You seem to have used similarly-spelled words in place of your intended word often (gregarious instead of gorgeous, etc.).

The story has a few other typos, but it isn't that bad. The content itself looks quite promising.

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