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Reviewer: baq17 Signed Report
Date: 09/15/16 02:49 pm Title: Ch 1 - Where It All Ends Up

I really enjoyed reading your work after you read mine. I look forward to reading anything else you publish, I hope to have a chance to add thoughts to yours as you have to mine (again, please keep the ideas coming as I publish more, I really like hearing your ideas).

A friend and a fan,

Baq

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/22/15 09:38 am Title: Ch 1 - Where It All Ends Up

Oh very awesome story liking it very much waiting for more thanks 😻😎

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. The story getting some reviews as fast as it has, has got me REALLY inspired to continue. Hopefully I should be able to post the next chapter soonish.

Reviewer: AlexiaRose Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/22/15 07:17 am Title: Ch 1 - Where It All Ends Up

Your grammar was not so bad as to take me out of the story. I really liked it and felt myself melting into the pet you wrote about. I am similar to her with my online mistress except for my being totally under her hypnotic control. This was a good balance of sex and background. It is hard to wait and let the story build, but you gave just enough to make this just like the pleasure torture inflicted on the Mistress. I liked it and am tracking.

Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback. It's awesome to hear that Im getting close to emulating that relationship structure. I turly hope you enjoy the rest.

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