Date: 09/16/15 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?
An interesting start, and I'll be waiting to see where you take it from here. I've read this type of story before, but I like the way that her memories and/or mannerisms seem to be reappearing slowly, and he (now she) isn't sure why. It's a nice twist.
I wish the intro had been a bit longer, before he wakes up in the hospital - especially since his wife is only mentioned later. Wouldn't she have been in bed with him at the start? Or are you planning to introduce pieces from his past later?
Author's Response: She will appear. I have the beginning and end already figured, its the journey that I'm writing. I hope you enjoy it.