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Reviewer: Elly Signed Report
Date: 09/30/17 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 5 Everybody wants to rule the world

Like it so far:)
Dont understand if she still has Steves mind , Allie's, both or something else but its pretty interesting.

Reviewer: rtbateman Signed Report
Date: 02/27/16 08:20 am Title: Chapter 8 The Pass

I suppose that Allie is going to go searching for whomever it was that she came from. And find out that he had died in his sleep. At least that would be the most natural line of thought.

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/21/15 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 7 Song and Emotion

I love this story. It's funny. I wish that was my life.

Author's Response: Maybe life is a dream?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/20/15 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 2 Home sweet home

The first two chapters were good!

Author's Response: Thank you. It's a work in process. It started fast and left a lot of questions, but all will be answered by the end.

Reviewer: nitewatchman Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/16/15 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1 How did I get here?

An interesting start, and I'll be waiting to see where you take it from here. I've read this type of story before, but I like the way that her memories and/or mannerisms seem to be reappearing slowly, and he (now she) isn't sure why. It's a nice twist.

I wish the intro had been a bit longer, before he wakes up in the hospital - especially since his wife is only mentioned later. Wouldn't she have been in bed with him at the start? Or are you planning to introduce pieces from his past later?

Author's Response: She will appear. I have the beginning and end already figured, its the journey that I'm writing. I hope you enjoy it.

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