Date: 08/12/15 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1 What do you say? Did dad kiss another girl?
story idea works ,but hard to follow some ."Carina wore the box to the kitchen, so she lied it on the table and called after her son"..."
You must address me for mom and I must call you for John outside. But you will call me for John and I will address you for mom like common in the private, huh?""
Author's Response: Thanks you. My grammar is the worst thing, like I wrote. Will I change "wore" to "took"? What is different of "address" and "call"?