Date: 05/27/15 04:48 am Title: Chapter 2
By weird i mean like sudden cow tits and stuff or coming up with some really intense fictional universe (sci-fi or fantasy) only to make the tg and sex largely secondary to thier weird little fan fiction 20 chapter piece. I know that is just my opinion but there is far to many stories like that here and not enough sexy romp stories of Tg. A good mental change/battle along with physical changes is still pretty good though.
Sucks that since the character is 15 the story will be mostly PG though
Date: 05/26/15 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
This looks like it has a lot of potential. Please make this good and don't abandon it.
There's no good stories on this site anymore, the few ones that have potential either get really weird or never get updated. It would be awesome to see a regular mental/physical magical transformation from boy to girl and hopefully some sexual urges and situations along the way.
I'll give this a high rating for it's potential for now.
Author's Response: Um... What do you mean by "get weird"?
Also, urges I can promise you. Situations, probably not so much. Adam is only fifteen for cryin' out loud.
Date: 05/25/15 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Man, Adam doesn't deserve this. That witch knew he wasn't doing anything truely wrong and not she's basically taking his whole life away. Does anyone here really think this punishment is appropriate for what he did? What is her problem? Does she really think this is fair when she knows he was only trying to get back what Dean stole?
It just makes me so mad, seeing another nice guy get punished in a TG story. She only cares about the act, not about the MOTIVE behind the act. Why is the world so black and white to her? She only sees this guy as a criminal, when he only wanted to help a friend and right a wrong. WHY?
Author's Response: The sorceress's reasons are important and will be addressed. Don't worry. Nobody except the sorceress believes she's doing the right thing.