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Reviewer: Overlord Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/19 06:27 am Title: Chapter 20 I tell Roger I will marry him .

Nice chapter, but I hope "Laura" doesn't forget that she really is Jill's father.

Reviewer: Overlord Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/16/19 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 19 I enjoy sex with Roger and tell him I'll be his girlfriend

Great Chapter! and thanks for continuing this story!

Reviewer: Princess_Panty_boy 92646 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/10/17 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 18 Sex with Roger my way

Fun story hun thank you for sharing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Hugs princess

Reviewer: Overlord Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/11/16 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 18 Sex with Roger my way

Fabulous story, please continue the story

Reviewer: RobertoVilla Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/10/15 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 Mistaking me for my daughter

I love the story, but I feel like the real Jill will probably get a little jealous of her father basically living her life so perfectly. So much that she might order some steroids online in order to cure her injured legs faster and, oh no, it turns out it's also filled with testosterone. So she can walk but soon she's gaining muscle mass in all the "wrong" places and also a father figure hasn't shown up in the house for what seems like months so someone might so sniffing around about that.

Just a suggestion.

Reviewer: AlexisLyons Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/23/15 04:24 am Title: Chapter 17 I masturbate my vagina for the first time

Love this story please write more very soon

Reviewer: kareno Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/16/15 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1 Mistaking me for my daughter

Please finish story before you add to others. Waiting for the conclusion. Great story

Reviewer: Yvonne Geymeier Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/26/15 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 Mistaking me for my daughter

Great story wit a funny attidute. But I still wonder what is / was he doing at work. I know it's just a story :)

Reviewer: Sophie21 Signed Report
Date: 04/20/15 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 Mistaking me for my daughter

Enjoying it so far. Keep it up :) Will rate when it's completed

Reviewer: Hawkeye Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/16/15 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 Mistaking me for my daughter

Your grammar and layout of the story could use some work; otherwise it's pretty good.

Reviewer: AlexisLyons Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/16/15 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 5 it seems I said yes to go on a date with him

this is my favorite story to read!!! so please keep writing!!!

Reviewer: AlexisLyons Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/13/15 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 3 Forced to go to the Mall wearing my new dress

this is such a great story, I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: KawaiiQueenMe Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/12/15 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 3 Forced to go to the Mall wearing my new dress

Geez that miss young wowy is she Bossy

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