Date: 11/15/17 03:23 pm Title: If The Pump Fits...
Wow, I really admire your ability to write present tense thoughts like you do. It's so in-the-moment. My own story uses present tense thoughts, but not nearly as closely or intensely as yours does. Impressive, really. Well done ^.^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always been pretty good at writing in present tense like that. Just a matter of losing myself in the character and letting that kind of stream of consciousness flow. Reacting how I would react. But you do a great job with the present tense as well! :)
Date: 11/13/17 05:24 pm Title: If The Pump Fits...
You cannot possibly imagine, how much I have been waiting for this. Thank you very much. This story is one of the few that mde me laugh like crazy, cry and be so so waiting for it to go on. Now that the happy end is in sight I can relax. Wonderful story!
Author's Response: I'm glad I could deliver after so long a wait, and I'm glad it was worth it! Thank you so much for the high praise! :)
Date: 11/13/17 05:03 pm Title: If The Pump Fits...
Very exciting and you have a good sense of humour :) a nice detailed transformation, I’ll be excited to read the finale
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I can do some of your previous work justice. I always did enjoy your writing with those scenes. :)
Date: 08/18/17 05:31 am Title: Another Saturday Morning
This story is amazing! Your style and tone is unique and funny. The plot is compelling and connectable, with sexy times that don't overshadow the plot yet still provide good erotica. Please finish this Pepper!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm working on it! It's slow, but I still plan on finishing it!
Date: 05/26/17 05:36 pm Title: That's a McWrap?
oh, please Pepper, finish this story. I have rarely laughed that hard, cried that hard and enjoyed a story THAT MUCH.
Date: 01/29/17 01:04 am Title: Another Saturday Morning
Man I'm REALLY loving this story as you slowly and lovingly roll it out. Superb everything, starting with the concept and the hilarious title, and your exposition and storytelling. More please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! There will be more. I know it's taken a while but I plan on finishing this one! Keep your eyes on it!
Date: 01/28/17 12:17 am Title: Some Charming Morning
Oh :o I'm liking this more now
I hope they find each other and he becomes a women again gonna be interesting to see how all this goes down
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it, we'll see. Magic works in mysterious ways. ;)
Date: 10/03/16 06:06 pm Title: Keys to the VIP
Love it! Great humour and the conversations flow well. Please don't leave it a year before updating again! I think Kayla and Natalie so need to hook up btw :)
Author's Response: I think Chapter 7 is going to be satisfying then. Not too satisfying though ;)
Date: 04/02/16 06:59 pm Title: Find Me In Da Club
I like your sense of humour, just smiling before I cracked up at the mouse jokes, very nice style Pepper, I like it.
Date: 09/05/15 12:39 pm Title: Find Me In Da Club
This is turning into an awesome night for kayla! I really, really like this story! I hope you do more of it - its very entertaining. I love how she's nicknaming her fairy godmother FG and all the little details you toss in. I need to do more of that, frankly. You're awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! I am trying to keep that stream of consciousness feel to it, so I feel the details do aid in that, so I'm very happy you appreciate it!
Date: 04/08/15 05:34 am Title: Another Saturday Morning
I like Kevin - and I like the writing style you wrote the story with. It makes him easy to sympathize with and easy to start to understand. It has just enough detail to get the story going, without too much to bog you down in 'wall of text' style info dumps. I can't wait to see where you go with this...