Date: 06/18/15 03:16 am Title: Sophia
First of all, welcome back. I missed you. Take your time with Simone Says. I'd rather it be perfect than here quickly, even if it has been over a year.
As for this story, another rousing success. The story worked, and the characters were well defined. Kudos. This story worked very well in a revenge tale kind of way. I felt briefly for a moment like I was reading an old Tales From The Crypt comic or something(Oddly enough, your story has that kind of a feel to me) since it's about a horrible person getting their just desserts in a horribly ironic way.
Does "Sophia" hold down a job in the new reality, or does Lucy/her family take care of her? She doesn't seem merely ditzy or bimboesque. The way you wrote her made her seem mentally disabled.
Date: 04/06/15 09:52 am Title: Lucy
This is a beautifully written transformation piece that deals with exactly the type of bimboficafion I like to see - the kind that leaves the character capable of functioning in the real world.
Great work, thankyou for sharing it with us.