Reviews For The Monkey's Paw
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Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/18/15 03:16 am Title: Sophia

First of all, welcome back. I missed you. Take your time with Simone Says. I'd rather it be perfect than here quickly, even if it has been over a year.

As for this story, another rousing success. The story worked, and the characters were well defined. Kudos. This story worked very well in a revenge tale kind of way. I felt briefly for a moment like I was reading an old Tales From The Crypt comic or something(Oddly enough, your story has that kind of a feel to me) since it's about a horrible person getting their just desserts in a horribly ironic way.

Does "Sophia" hold down a job in the new reality, or does Lucy/her family take care of her? She doesn't seem merely ditzy or bimboesque. The way you wrote her made her seem mentally disabled.

Reviewer: mignon Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/07/15 03:19 am Title: Sophia

This was so much fun! I really wanted more, more...more! :)

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 04/06/15 08:40 pm Title: Sophia

Awesome!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/06/15 11:18 am Title: Lucy

Good start!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/06/15 10:34 am Title: Lucy

Good start!

Reviewer: Faye Kistry Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/06/15 09:52 am Title: Lucy

This is a beautifully written transformation piece that deals with exactly the type of bimboficafion I like to see - the kind that leaves the character capable of functioning in the real world.

Great work, thankyou for sharing it with us.

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