Date: 05/10/15 07:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Spectacular job here! The description, both of Theseus' change and the subsequent activities, is wonderfully detailed. While the transformation is certainly unusual for the site, it is done with such creativity and care that the form manages to be quite appealing while still retaining appropriately monstrous undertones. Another facet I greatly enjoyed was the setting and the twist on the classic it took on. I at least would be curious to see a postscript to the fate of the Minotaur and his mate (and do those two remain nameless, or did they pick up names when they started naming their children?). All in all, masterfully done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It turned into much more than I expected and I really enjoyed using the setting. The two are, as yet, unnamed. But, who knows? Maybe I'll do another chapter at some point in the future with a bit more information. Thank you again!