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Reviewer: Princess_Panty_boy 92646 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/08/16 08:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Fun story hun thanks for sharing it with us.

hugs Princess

Reviewer: Anonymous Shift Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/15/16 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I always enjoy a good role inversion, especially from when the character changes from weak to strong and rebellious. I think you did an excellent job of conveying the ways in which Jacqueline is different from Jack without it feeling like an identity death. More like an identity rejection, if that makes any sense.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/06/15 04:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Cute and interesting!

Reviewer: SD1987 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/05/15 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes! Great story, but I too would love to see what would happen if Steve had the potion used on him instead of on Jack. Please write a second, alternate ending.

Reviewer: zapanth Signed Report
Date: 03/05/15 08:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story! Would it be possible to have another where Jack didn't get sprayed and Steve did?

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