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Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/15 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is definitely a different retelling of the minotaur legend - so far I like it, but it is strange. I've never seen someone write about turning into what appears to be a cow woman before. You dedicate a lot of time to describing veins - is that significant? I'm not aware of its importance.

Author's Response: Hello and thank you! Udder veins are interesting to me as part of cow TFs and part of the transformation process. I tend to describe in detail and especially like showing small yet distinct changes so that's one of them. To show that, yeah, definitely not human any more.

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/15 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting ty

Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you very much for the comment and the rating!

Reviewer: Mars Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/15 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Amazing stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you! Anything in particular you liked about it?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/15 09:13 am Title: Chapter 1

A good start!

Author's Response: Thanks! Part two should be out later this week :)

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