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Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/03/15 06:26 pm Title: Part 1 & 2

poor little boy he sure got himself in a pickle of a mess. Really enjoyed this story alot. Really enjoy all of your work

Reviewer: Monster1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/15 10:30 pm Title: Part 1 & 2

Wow, poor Barry! He is not going to have an easy life! But, this story is so fun and I can't wait for more! I'm hoping to see him in a girly baby crib or stroller, that would be fun. Thank you for updating and I love how the story is going so far!

Reviewer: silvercaster Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/15 04:25 pm Title: Part 1 & 2

While I like the themes of your stories, I mostly enjoy the rhythm of your writing. Please keep writing! This particular story has the benefit (at last) of providing the mother with a clearly understandable reason for turning her son to a baby daughter. Quite enjoyable. Do you plan writing more parts in this story?

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