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Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/29/17 07:49 pm Title: Playing With Ether

Loved the chapter! I forgot about this story, didn't expect it to ever be finished. I look forward to more, I love it!

Author's Response: Well, this is one of the... admittedly few stories I *do* plan on finishing! For certain, anyhow. There's a few I may have to just say "nope" and totally drop, unfortunately... Hopefully I can keep up the writing, and you won't have to wait too long!

Reviewer: grabber_blue Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/11/17 10:25 am Title: Magic

Hmm interesting chapter. I feel like your rushing. But that could be from me not sleeping haha. Can't wait for more

Author's Response: I do have a tendency to rush... but I figured nobody would notice on my information dump. I do have a bit of inspiration for this, so it may come out sooner rather than later!

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/11/17 03:42 am Title: Magic

Wow

Author's Response: I'm... not totally sure how to respond to that. I'm glad that you seemed to like it, though!

Reviewer: grabber_blue Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/28/17 12:59 pm Title: New Power

Glad to see you back. If missed this story. Can't wait for more

Author's Response: This story is one of my focuses now, finally. I'll be trying to update it as often as possible, but there's this new idea I've been toying with... more on that later. Glad to hear it, and I hope I can post this semi-regularly again!

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 08/08/16 06:18 am Title: Reunion

Yeah remember when i said i was slighly lost with winds of change? This chapter takes the cake :P

Author's Response: Does it? Well, shoot. I suppose I might have to edit... maybe...

Reviewer: grabber_blue Signed Report
Date: 08/07/16 11:31 am Title: Reunion

Hmmm interesting :o
Where shall the story go now :)

Author's Response: It shall go in the direction that shall do. It may have a little delay while I figure out precisely where it will go...

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 03/19/16 09:11 pm Title: Airplane

Jesus just threatens anyone she wants. Breaks a guys legs because of a stroke seems a bit far! And kidnapping for your own country. In Antarctica of all places?

Author's Response: Oh, I never got an email for this. Yeah, she's a little corrupt at times. Just a little. Not over the top.

Reviewer: grabber_blue Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/17/16 02:35 am Title: Indianapolis

Oh my god had me sitting on the edge of my chair reading this. I was like noooooo she lost her awesomeness. Then its back. I can't wait for more. Itd be nice to have more detail of what she looked like though.
Other then that I loved it. I just got done reading all 20 chapters. They all had me up and down.
Can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll go and start off the next chapter with a description of her forms. It's amazing to hear you liked it so much, I hope I can keep you entertained!

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 02/16/16 11:20 pm Title: Normalcy

She never does seem to spend a lot of time in her heaven form I will not lie :). well at least she still wants to go home

Author's Response: It's just so easy to give in and let the corruption take hold of her! And she knows how to use it, too. You'll just have to wait and see how long she stays in this form...

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 02/16/16 09:31 pm Title: Indianapolis

Antartica?

Author's Response: You gotta start somewhere! And it's easy to hide things there...

Reviewer: TmC Signed Report
Date: 01/15/16 03:02 am Title: Pressure

This story is so interesting but very confusing. Things aren't explained well and I'm lost alot of the time as everything is rushing all around, one scene after another. I think it would benefit greatly from slowing down a bit. I'm still enjoying it though.

Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes I do have that problem... I'll try to slow down a little bit in the future, if I can

Reviewer: Saklad Signed Report
Date: 01/14/16 04:35 pm Title: Normalcy

Oh, She did that?

Author's Response: Yep, a chapter or so ago. No other influence should have changed her yet

Reviewer: Saklad Signed Report
Date: 01/14/16 04:13 pm Title: Normalcy

Oh, I just realized this review is recorded as Chapter 1. It should have been for Chapter 19. Weird.

Author's Response: Oh! Yeah, she still has influence from Her, which is causing her to act a bit... odd. Is that what you meant?

Reviewer: Saklad Signed Report
Date: 01/14/16 04:00 pm Title: Normalcy

The start. I guess that makes sense.

Author's Response: The start was just a quick run through to show an average-ish day before everything happens

Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/14/16 10:28 am Title: Forest

It was a little incoherent, but otherwise good.

Author's Response: A little incoherent? Where, precisely, if you don't mind me asking. Some parts were meant to be a bit incoherent

Reviewer: TmC Signed Report
Date: 01/10/16 10:27 pm Title: Normalcy

I realised there's nothing more annoying than someone who's annoyed at everything.

Author's Response: There are few things more annoying than that, but yeah, I certainly know what you mean...

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 01/02/16 04:53 am Title: Dragon

Ok yeah im lost im gonna re read the last 5 chapters lol, she has so many god damn mood swings :P

Author's Response: Yay mood swings! Honestly I'm not sure how I've been writing like this, it seems to be one of the few stories where I don't have to constantly go back and reread the last five chapters myself... So if you notice a consistency error, that's probably why

Reviewer: KawaiiQueenMe Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/27/15 05:26 pm Title: Her

i like this third form her influence is wonderfulllllllllllll

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! I've been waiting for that part for a while, now...

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 11/13/15 08:18 pm Title: Gone

Well shit his the fan fast

Author's Response: Sometimes it does, yes. I wonder what's going to happen next...

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 11/02/15 09:03 am Title: Training

Shes so bi-polar! Good side then goes out hunting and turns dark? And gonna betray her own father and mother?


And what about the male she gonna TG him?

Author's Response: Who knows? And yeah, she doesn't seem to be too good at fighting off corruption...

Reviewer: KawaiiQueenMe Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/03/15 09:06 pm Title: Fight the demons!

oooh this is good exciting even. who is this mysterious woman? i'm glad to even see an update and it was a vreat chapter. hmmm i wonder will suzanna be corrupted??? yes, no, maybe so!?

Author's Response: Perhaps, perhaps not...

Reviewer: KawaiiQueenMe Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/31/15 03:51 pm Title: Cleansing

...hmmm i like it when she's evil... oh well your still evil with a cliffhanger lol, but anywho it's another step forward and i can't waitvfor more.

Author's Response: Wonderful to hear! Perhaps I'll get another chapter done soon enough

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 07/31/15 11:44 am Title: Cleansing

For once i dont care about the cliffhanger the chapter was just that funny

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the humor!

Reviewer: Darkseide Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/20/15 01:14 am Title: A visit to Hell

Getting interesting... Normally I'm a fan of Hellfire and all that, but this I'm i'm a bit more hopefull that she'll wind up on the good side

Author's Response: It's interesting listening to these reviews, people are starting to take sides! You'll have to wait and see which side she ends up favoring...

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 05/26/15 11:11 pm Title: A visit to Hell

Yeah she's leaning more towards hell :D

Author's Response: Indeed she is... but will she continue? Who knows...

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/24/15 05:08 am Title: A visit to Hell

Very awesome story love it totally 😍👏👏😘

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to keep you entertained!

Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/23/15 08:04 am Title: A visit to Hell

Great as always. I find it hard to believe that no one has gone into shock from this, though. Actually, I find it hard to believe anyone hasn't.

Author's Response: Holly isn't the most... observant of people. She sees a few people, and by no way at all is everybody still going to that school.

Reviewer: Darkseide Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/21/15 10:42 pm Title: Return to school

Pretty interesting so far. I don't suppose she could become a Cheerleader? *shrugs* Looking forward to the next bit regardless. Hoping she'll be more Angelic, but it's your story

Author's Response: Oh, I have plans... the next chapter should probably be up tomorrow, so you won't have to wait long!

Reviewer: Javlin Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/17/15 12:04 pm Title: Return to school

After reading the summary for this story a while ago I didn't think I would enjoy it, so I avoided it. But tonight I was bored at work and had finished reading all the stories I follow and decided to give your one a try and I am glad I took the time to read it. The storyline is interesting and enjoyable to read and I look forward to seeing where the story goes.
I am tracking it now and can't wait for more chapters.

Author's Response: The tracking function, unfortunately, doesn't always work. Glad to see you're enjoying it! I have plans for later chapters, so it should be around a while...

Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/16/15 04:13 pm Title: Return to school

Is Holly becoming more evil, or will there be a counter-balance? Incredible as always.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! So many questions, so few answers... as of now.

Reviewer: Towny365 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/16/15 09:32 am Title: Return to school

Loving it so far, feels fresh and there's a lot you can do with this story. Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I look forward to hearing from you in the future, I've got plans for this story

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/27/15 01:31 pm Title: Mother

Well just read the 3 updates and figured id just wait till i was done and just make one review for all 3 chapters. Well first thing ill say is WOW, God being her mom really threw me for a loop and nice touch. Really enjoyed the new chapters and things seem to be moving along nicely. Cant wait to see what happens next and see what new surprises you have waiting for us

Author's Response: Thanks! Really glad to hear you're enjoying it, and I do hope I can keep it up, but life has been busy and I haven't been able to write as much this last little while

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/13/15 02:50 pm Title: A day in Hell

`who would have thought that i would be enjoying a story involving Satan. Just caught up and wow is all i can say :) Great story so far and keep it coming please

Author's Response: It's going to be coming for a while... I'm so glad you're enjoying it thus far!

Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/12/15 08:25 pm Title: A day in Hell

This is really unique and well-written. I can't wait to see where the story goes next.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope to get the next chapter out soon-ish

Reviewer: Towny365 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/12/15 12:00 pm Title: A day in Hell

Just great, loving it so far, especially the direction it is going. Really interested in seeing what happens.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and I hope you enjoy the future chapters!

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 04/12/15 06:13 am Title: A day in Hell

Im looking forward to this

Author's Response: Wonderful to hear! I'll continue writing for a while to come, I hope I don't lose your interest during the inevitable pauses!

Reviewer: Towny365 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/08/15 08:02 am Title: School with a daemon Mistress

Super work here, looking forward to seeing what happens next !

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/07/15 12:35 am Title: The Assembly

interesting ending there. Never would have thought the story to go in a demonic direction. But looking forward to see what happens now

Author's Response: You shouldn't have to wait long! It looks like the next chapter might be out within the next 24 hours...

Reviewer: Towny365 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/06/15 04:03 pm Title: The Assembly

Gotta say I can't wait to see how it goes, good work

Author's Response: Well, you won't have to wait too long! I'm looking at tomorrow for the next chapter...

Reviewer: Saklad Signed Report
Date: 02/25/15 08:55 pm Title: Normalcy

WAY too much swearwords. They lose impact after a while, since cuss words basically get their meaning from not being used. That makes it meaningful when you DO use it. Swearing constantly just makes it annoying.

Author's Response: I know, but I wanted to make to show that the character is rather fed up with the world as it is. The swearing should die down drastically very soon, so don't worry about that.

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/25/15 10:30 am Title: Normalcy

interesting start so far. Still not sure where story is going but it still was a fun read so far.

Author's Response: Really? Great to hear! I thought it was rather boring myself... just setting everything up. Giving the main character (as I haven't revealed his name) some background.

Reviewer: dgenerateaaron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/25/15 12:00 am Title: Normalcy

Not bad i'm curious where this one will go and see what happens next

Author's Response: I hate to make you wait, but I plan on posting for a different story next... I need to finish some of them.

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