Date: 05/29/17 07:49 pm Title: Playing With Ether
Loved the chapter! I forgot about this story, didn't expect it to ever be finished. I look forward to more, I love it!
Author's Response: Well, this is one of the... admittedly few stories I *do* plan on finishing! For certain, anyhow. There's a few I may have to just say "nope" and totally drop, unfortunately... Hopefully I can keep up the writing, and you won't have to wait too long!
Date: 04/11/17 10:25 am Title: Magic
Hmm interesting chapter. I feel like your rushing. But that could be from me not sleeping haha. Can't wait for more
Author's Response: I do have a tendency to rush... but I figured nobody would notice on my information dump. I do have a bit of inspiration for this, so it may come out sooner rather than later!
Date: 02/28/17 12:59 pm Title: New Power
Glad to see you back. If missed this story. Can't wait for more
Author's Response: This story is one of my focuses now, finally. I'll be trying to update it as often as possible, but there's this new idea I've been toying with... more on that later. Glad to hear it, and I hope I can post this semi-regularly again!
Date: 03/19/16 09:11 pm Title: Airplane
Jesus just threatens anyone she wants. Breaks a guys legs because of a stroke seems a bit far! And kidnapping for your own country. In Antarctica of all places?
Author's Response: Oh, I never got an email for this. Yeah, she's a little corrupt at times. Just a little. Not over the top.
Date: 02/17/16 02:35 am Title: Indianapolis
Oh my god had me sitting on the edge of my chair reading this. I was like noooooo she lost her awesomeness. Then its back. I can't wait for more. Itd be nice to have more detail of what she looked like though.
Other then that I loved it. I just got done reading all 20 chapters. They all had me up and down.
Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll go and start off the next chapter with a description of her forms. It's amazing to hear you liked it so much, I hope I can keep you entertained!
Date: 02/16/16 11:20 pm Title: Normalcy
She never does seem to spend a lot of time in her heaven form I will not lie :). well at least she still wants to go home
Author's Response: It's just so easy to give in and let the corruption take hold of her! And she knows how to use it, too. You'll just have to wait and see how long she stays in this form...
Date: 01/15/16 03:02 am Title: Pressure
This story is so interesting but very confusing. Things aren't explained well and I'm lost alot of the time as everything is rushing all around, one scene after another. I think it would benefit greatly from slowing down a bit. I'm still enjoying it though.
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes I do have that problem... I'll try to slow down a little bit in the future, if I can
Date: 01/02/16 04:53 am Title: Dragon
Ok yeah im lost im gonna re read the last 5 chapters lol, she has so many god damn mood swings :P
Author's Response: Yay mood swings! Honestly I'm not sure how I've been writing like this, it seems to be one of the few stories where I don't have to constantly go back and reread the last five chapters myself... So if you notice a consistency error, that's probably why
Date: 11/02/15 09:03 am Title: Training
Shes so bi-polar! Good side then goes out hunting and turns dark? And gonna betray her own father and mother?
And what about the male she gonna TG him?
Author's Response: Who knows? And yeah, she doesn't seem to be too good at fighting off corruption...
Date: 09/03/15 09:06 pm Title: Fight the demons!
oooh this is good exciting even. who is this mysterious woman? i'm glad to even see an update and it was a vreat chapter. hmmm i wonder will suzanna be corrupted??? yes, no, maybe so!?
Author's Response: Perhaps, perhaps not...
Date: 07/31/15 03:51 pm Title: Cleansing
...hmmm i like it when she's evil... oh well your still evil with a cliffhanger lol, but anywho it's another step forward and i can't waitvfor more.
Author's Response: Wonderful to hear! Perhaps I'll get another chapter done soon enough
Date: 06/20/15 01:14 am Title: A visit to Hell
Getting interesting... Normally I'm a fan of Hellfire and all that, but this I'm i'm a bit more hopefull that she'll wind up on the good side
Author's Response: It's interesting listening to these reviews, people are starting to take sides! You'll have to wait and see which side she ends up favoring...
Date: 05/23/15 08:04 am Title: A visit to Hell
Great as always. I find it hard to believe that no one has gone into shock from this, though. Actually, I find it hard to believe anyone hasn't.
Author's Response: Holly isn't the most... observant of people. She sees a few people, and by no way at all is everybody still going to that school.
Date: 05/21/15 10:42 pm Title: Return to school
Pretty interesting so far. I don't suppose she could become a Cheerleader? *shrugs* Looking forward to the next bit regardless. Hoping she'll be more Angelic, but it's your story
Author's Response: Oh, I have plans... the next chapter should probably be up tomorrow, so you won't have to wait long!
Date: 05/17/15 12:04 pm Title: Return to school
After reading the summary for this story a while ago I didn't think I would enjoy it, so I avoided it. But tonight I was bored at work and had finished reading all the stories I follow and decided to give your one a try and I am glad I took the time to read it. The storyline is interesting and enjoyable to read and I look forward to seeing where the story goes.
I am tracking it now and can't wait for more chapters.
Author's Response: The tracking function, unfortunately, doesn't always work. Glad to see you're enjoying it! I have plans for later chapters, so it should be around a while...
Date: 04/27/15 01:31 pm Title: Mother
Well just read the 3 updates and figured id just wait till i was done and just make one review for all 3 chapters. Well first thing ill say is WOW, God being her mom really threw me for a loop and nice touch. Really enjoyed the new chapters and things seem to be moving along nicely. Cant wait to see what happens next and see what new surprises you have waiting for us
Author's Response: Thanks! Really glad to hear you're enjoying it, and I do hope I can keep it up, but life has been busy and I haven't been able to write as much this last little while
Date: 04/13/15 02:50 pm Title: A day in Hell
`who would have thought that i would be enjoying a story involving Satan. Just caught up and wow is all i can say :) Great story so far and keep it coming please
Author's Response: It's going to be coming for a while... I'm so glad you're enjoying it thus far!
Date: 04/07/15 12:35 am Title: The Assembly
interesting ending there. Never would have thought the story to go in a demonic direction. But looking forward to see what happens now
Author's Response: You shouldn't have to wait long! It looks like the next chapter might be out within the next 24 hours...
Date: 02/25/15 08:55 pm Title: Normalcy
WAY too much swearwords. They lose impact after a while, since cuss words basically get their meaning from not being used. That makes it meaningful when you DO use it. Swearing constantly just makes it annoying.
Author's Response: I know, but I wanted to make to show that the character is rather fed up with the world as it is. The swearing should die down drastically very soon, so don't worry about that.
Date: 02/25/15 10:30 am Title: Normalcy
interesting start so far. Still not sure where story is going but it still was a fun read so far.
Author's Response: Really? Great to hear! I thought it was rather boring myself... just setting everything up. Giving the main character (as I haven't revealed his name) some background.