Reviews For High Voltage
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Reviewer: rtbateman Signed Report
Date: 03/04/16 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 2: Waking up

What's to get all torn up over? Can I get zapped and turn into a luscious lady with dark brown hair, oh please?

Reviewer: Person42 Signed Report
Date: 02/24/15 04:24 am Title: Chapter 5: Dinner

You said this was part of a CYOC... I hope that means it's actually going to be finished and not just left here to die because nobody else will contribute to this specific path...

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/22/15 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 5: Dinner

Wow very interesting,I'm loving the storyline so far!

Reviewer: Semantics Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/22/15 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1: The Incident

Great story so far, interesting plot development. Hope that the rest of the story is this good or better! Would like to see longer chapters though, maybe combine two chapters into one, but ultimately, you're the author and have the story at heart, just suggesting, that's all. Interested to see how it all ends though!

Reviewer: Desert Willow Signed Report
Date: 02/22/15 05:40 am Title: Chapter 5: Dinner

You're starting off pretty good here, even if the chapters feel just a little shorter than I'm used to (no worries there). btw, I think you forgot to close the italics in chapter 3.

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