Reviews For James
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Reviewer: magisterb Signed starstar Report
Date: 05/25/15 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

The story begins too abruptly. No transformation is shown. The story is too short and needs some fleshing out

Author's Response: It's a sequel

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/17/15 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 8

Awesome 👏👏

Reviewer: Greatsage Signed Report
Date: 03/04/15 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1

It is reassuring to know that a teenager from Overseas with no ID and dressed like a hooker can walk into any school in Phoenix Arizona and get a job as a teacher. America truly IS the land of Opportunity. :P

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/27/15 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love how you wrote how the girls acted in class.

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/15/15 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

Interesting but fun to read.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 02/15/15 10:59 am Title: Chapter 2

Cute

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 02/12/15 10:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Cute!

Reviewer: Casey Thompson Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/12/15 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1

More, please.

Reviewer: TG Wonder Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/12/15 03:04 am Title: Chapter 1

The writing here is excellent, and the mystery behind how James got to be where she is is fascinating. I'd love to see this story developed more. Only thing is it might be a good idea to change the description so people know what they're getting it to.

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