Reviews For Mixing Magic
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Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/02/18 06:22 pm Title: A Tale of Transgender Betrayal

Yikes... the mom and the sister are both pretty evil, that poor kid... The grandmother was pretty evil too. You don't do stuff like that and be considered good. Yikes yikes triple yikes!

Reviewer: licorice Signed Report
Date: 04/06/15 08:46 pm Title: A Tale of Transgender Betrayal

that's...a really evil mom

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/04/15 01:58 pm Title: A Tale of Transgender Betrayal


Reviewer: Xoop Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/03/15 03:05 am Title: A Tale of Transgender Betrayal

I always like the idea of someone either tricked into crossdressing or fully TGing, or agreeing to one thing and getting quite another. I also like that his personality wasn't totally overwritten - he could talk about how upset he was, at least with Cheryl. My only disappointment was that (spoiler alert) Cheryl gets off scott-free. After he's able to tell his parents what happened, I'd have liked there to be some consequences aimed in her direction. Otherwise, a very nice tale!

Author's Response: Thanks. Totally get the issue with Cheryl scot-free (I used to think it was "scott-free" too, but it isn't). In a longer story there'd be more room to work out those sorts of issues. I just wanted to explore the scenario of twins switching roles for some reason and see where it went. There just wasn't enough there to make it a longer story. (This is actually termed a "vignette" on my website, so it isn't a full-fledged story.)

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