Reviews For The Black Rose
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Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/03/15 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 2: BURN BABY BURN

Well it's good, but you definitely need to think about adding more to this story.

Reviewer: Jacks-O-Lance Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/03/15 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Day it happened

Well I got bored and decided to read all the Peace Corp stories I haven't read yet. (I've only read the Hunt For Red Phoenix and Lyfe & Deph.)

This chapter is good, needs a little work; but I like it.

Reviewer: happygolucky Signed starstar Report
Date: 03/25/15 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 2: BURN BABY BURN

Short with not much plot development. Also had odd paragraph breaks. Not an especially good story.

Author's Response: this was a set up story for Peace corp hunt for red Phoenix. It was deliberately vague as possible because I didn't want to have a long six chapter story explaining how a character was created and why her main antagonist hates her.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/09/15 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1: The Day it happened

Nice start! Looking forward for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Next part should be up by weekend

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