Date: 01/14/20 12:55 am Title: Test Your Might
Ch. 7 - Superb chapter. Heck, superb story all around at this point. I love the fact that she's willing to fight back and take the battle to the enemy. I'll be watching for the next chapter, this story is really good. Also, I'm wondering if she might be able to develop some kind of super-powers in the future to spice things up.
Date: 01/06/15 12:31 am Title: Lilith
Excellently done, a well balanced short story that included all the necessary details. The sex and dialogue was fun as was the anticipation and knowledge of the occurring transformation. The only complaint I might have for this is that it seemed a bit methodical at times which is something I struggle with as well. Incredibly minor subjective preferences aside this was the most solid piece of work I've read on this site in a while.
Author's Response: Thanks Sir! I appreciate the feedback :) I love reading what my readers say about my work. I told someone else, and i don't know if you're thinking the same thing, but my story doesn't end here. Next time i update, i'm also going to change the fourth chapter's name. I guess it was a bad idea to call it "It's done" lol. More to come! Stay tuned if you're interested in reading further!!
Date: 01/03/15 05:07 am Title: See You In Hell
An interesting story here, but a bit on the abbreviated side. Good work generally though. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Lol. I don't know if you meant the chapters are abbreviated or if you thought the whole story is done but there's definitely more to come and I'll be making the chapters longer. Thanks for reading so far! :)
Date: 12/29/14 04:16 pm Title: A Losing Battle
Wow, this is turning into my absolute favorite story on the entire site.
The chapters seem to be coming steadily, but they're frustratingly short, and the wait is killing me.
Just like Daryl's dreams.
Author's Response: I glad you're enjoying my story! I've got a lot more in store for Daryl so hopefully you keep enjoying :)