Date: 12/13/14 02:23 pm Title: Late present delivery
Very nice, I would love a sequal
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review :) and on the sequel, I'm afraid you'll have to wait until next Christmas ;) joking, not sure on a sequel I will see if I have time. Feel free i use the idea though if you want to do one.
Date: 12/12/14 07:22 am Title: Late present delivery
Umm, I think, Wow! If had that much fun, going back wouldn't be an option! It'd be a "Calgon take me away" moment as soon as I got home! Ahh well, dare I to dream! Nice Christmas Short Towny! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Haha thank you, appreciate it, glad you liked it :) loving hugs back at you x and yeah I would be the same lol :)
Date: 12/12/14 04:50 am Title: Late present delivery
A cute idea, but you could have done more with the plot. Also, you should have someone proofread your finished story.
Author's Response: Yeah i should've done more with the plot, just I hadn't much time, hope you liked it though. I might do a sequel or something then if I have time, cheers for the review :)