Date: 03/28/17 07:52 am Title: Scuba Mishaps
This is a fun collection! I have a soft spot for short story compilations and you handle it quite nicely. I look forward to seeing more in the future
Author's Response: Thank you! I try to update it every so often, when inspiration has been gone for too long. As a result, a few of these may be terrible.
Date: 02/07/17 11:25 pm Title: Giggle gas
This one was much sweeter and it is the first time I've seen NO used as a trigger for transformation. Usually NO is used for vasodilating purposes.
Author's Response: Hurrah! I had hoped this was the case, having the same transformations in every story would get boring quite fast, especially when writers like myself don't tend to go deeply into the transformation
Date: 02/07/17 11:22 pm Title: Taste the Medicine
Dark one. It seems a bit odd for a writer of transgender themed stories to be so fearful of transforming themselves though.
Author's Response: Yes, it is dark. Is it really that odd, though? A major change like that would startle anyone into thinking irrationally, and likely scare them
Date: 02/07/17 11:18 pm Title: Genetic Something or Another
Ha! Good one. FTM transformations are a rare sight, especially ones dealing with antropomorphism as well.
Author's Response: Thank you! There's too little FtM transformations. They're not quite my cup of tea, but I still think there deserves to be more
Date: 02/07/17 11:16 pm Title: Racist Holidays
If a person with a skewed view on women is turned into one, why have him become one that only supports his deluded mindset? I know that him turning into a homely woman without any super-sexy attributes is unsexy as heck but it seems more realistic in a situation such as this.
How will he appreciate women more when ve is gangraped in prison?
Author's Response: Honestly I did this one because I try not to do typical forced changes like this do to their misogynistic values. I wanted to write one thing like this for the experience of writing it, but could not conscientiously write more than this.
Date: 02/07/17 11:11 pm Title: Playing the Blues
From the first part of the story I figured that the protagonist was transsexual but the second part appears to dismiss this fact by the character turning into a female. Perhaps I am just reading too much into it...
Author's Response: Yeah, this one at first he's just depressed, not transsexual
Date: 02/07/17 11:07 pm Title: Scuba Mishaps
There are no fish that are carp-sized living at the bottom of the Mariana trench. It's a small thing and since the story is obvioudly about a magical change it can be explained by the fish's magical abilities.
Author's Response: Yeah, it was supposed to be a reference, not realistic
Date: 09/17/15 09:33 am Title: Scuba Mishaps
Incidentally, have you considered submitting to the mixed tape? For October, you can submit up to 1000 words. If you do, you'll have access to the doc and will be able to see the sneak peek of my new universe early. I mean...no pressure or anything. (Please do it, I want to see what you come up with)
Author's Response: I already do have access to the doc, actually. I just don't look at it. I might submit again one of these days, but who knows? I just write here whatever inspiration strikes whenever (unless it gets too long). I'll certainly consider writing for it again, though!
Date: 09/16/15 08:53 pm Title: Presidential Nominee
Oh cool, I like it! Nice short, Person!
Author's Response: Thank you! Honestly, I'm surprised to receive a review on this story. I just figured everyone would read the name, see politics, and stop go back to looking for things that better suit their tastes...
Date: 11/27/14 07:16 am Title: Scuba Mishaps
Considering it's a magical creature, not very. Like Percy Jackson, but more, you know, fishy.
Author's Response: I've never read or seen Percy Jackson, so I can't talk there, but it's true that mermaids are magical... still, perhaps a later story.
Date: 11/26/14 11:27 pm Title: Scuba Mishaps
That's it? And here I was half expecting a lonely merman to come and whisk away his newly transformed bride.
Author's Response: I was considering it, but deciding against it. Do you have any idea how strong that mermaid would have to be?