Date: 11/22/14 08:24 am Title: I Needed A New Daughter
What a lovely beginning for a first story. Now that you have your feet wet, please try some more. Take your time. Force yourself to slow the action down a bit. It's always nice to leave the reader anticipating what will happen next.
Date: 11/22/14 03:57 am Title: I Needed A New Daughter
Absolutely Amazing. I refuse to believe this is your first story. Lol. It's so well written. How you go into every detail of Kourtni's transformation as well as her first time. I hope mine will be just as amazing, if not more so. But I found very little spelling errors and was enthralled throughout. Just so brilliant. 5 out of 5