Reviews For Black Swordsman
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Reviewer: TmC Signed Report
Date: 11/30/14 10:37 am Title: Chapter 3: Magic

You've lost me. I've no idea what happened in this chapter.

Reviewer: redneck07 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/30/14 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1: The Black Swordsman

Good story But wtf

Reviewer: Person42 Signed Report
Date: 11/29/14 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 3: Magic

Uh, huh... so... twist? Interesting... but it's still moving fast.

Reviewer: A_Kent Signed Report
Date: 11/23/14 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Black Swordsman

More detail would have been nice even though this is a prologue. It might even have been better to put this all in as a flashback. Since it's a prologue I won't rate it yet. Try for more detail and I'll leave a rating for chapter 1

Reviewer: Person42 Signed Report
Date: 11/23/14 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 2: Changes

Ah good, it's Act 0. If it WAS Act 1 I would have criticized you for going WAY TOO FAST. I don't even know who the protagonist is, what they do, what happened...

Reviewer: SolsticeofStars Signed Report
Date: 11/23/14 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Black Swordsman

Surely this isn't a reference to SAO........

Reviewer: Grey Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 11/19/14 03:06 am Title: Chapter 1: The Black Swordsman

Interesting plot though it could do with a bit more detail to embellish and add content to the story.

Reviewer: redneck07 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/17/14 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Black Swordsman

Interesting
can't wait to see where you take it

Reviewer: HowieN Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/17/14 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Black Swordsman

Seems interesting, ill keep an eye or three on this one.
Reminds me of sword art online, Kirito (the protagonist) is called the black swordsman, was SAO inspiration for this at all or am I just imagining things?

Reviewer: Ronn0k Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/17/14 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Black Swordsman

Pretty cool. I'm interested in this also.

Thanks

Reviewer: Person42 Signed Report
Date: 11/16/14 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Black Swordsman

My money's on the all three. Hope you do manage to finish this one!

Reviewer: A_Kent Signed Report
Date: 11/16/14 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Black Swordsman

You've got my attention. Lets see what happens in chapter 2.

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