Date: 01/24/15 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hey Jim, I am loving this new story so much more than the first one! Very similar difficult situations but so far but Toni has been lucky so far. Here is hoping that she can come away with less emotional baggage than the previos. Also hoping that decent men ar'nt as rare as well, but that's just my personal preference.
Date: 01/14/15 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Still loving the story. It's a definite departure from the previous one. She still hasn't had any real, full sexual encounters yet, which is actually cool cause it's leaving me excited for when one finally happens. I can't tell who she might end up with when it finally happens: Tim, Johnny, McNiel, Morgan maybe? The only thing that I find off is that we are now ten chapters in and still two days away from the start of classes. It just sort of seems like time has mega slowed down. The previous story sometimes covered several weeks in just a single chapter. While I'm not complaining about what you've done, maybe time speeding up a bit couldn't hurt, unless there are important things that must happen before classes start. What do you think?
Date: 01/12/15 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm liking this one a whole lot more than the first one. There was a time near the middle of that one that I stopped reading since it was getting tedious reading about the protagonist wallowing through another day of self abuse and melancholy. But eventually I picked it up again.
So far, This one is a lot better suited to my taste. She's handling the change a lot better. Taking things day by day. I'm getting that feeling that she knows likes being a girl better, even if she doesn't realise it. Or at least she will eventually, despite the issues that come with it.
Date: 01/02/15 03:33 am Title: Book One, Chapter One
Enjoying it a lot so far, and appreciating your efforts. I seem to recall being put off by the first story and perhaps losing interest because (if I recall right) it was kind of harsh on the protaganist, not as much fun. So far this story has had (for me) a good balance of exploration and awkwardness, and fun exposition of Toni's mixed experiences.
Date: 12/28/14 08:23 am Title: Chapter 7
The newest chapter was great! I loved Toni's exploration of herself, her situation, and her emotions. Obviously there seems to be some chemistry between she and Tim, and I can't wait to see how she gets out of the situation with the rugby team. The next chapter seems like it will be pretty exciting.
Date: 12/04/14 02:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Well that will make things very interesting the next time Toni goes home. Or makes a phone call.
I also feel very sorry for his female self, ending up in the body of a not very healthy guy, distant parents and no sibling. It seems like this guy got the better deal.
Date: 11/05/14 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Story is great so far. I love how Tony is handling the change. I wonder how she discovers what her new identity is. I can't wait to see how she interacts with the others, and what sorts of relationships she develops. Can't wait for the next chapters to come.