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Reviewer: Bobbie Signed Report
Date: 06/30/16 03:26 am Title: Gear 1 - The Silver Tick

I agree with NatalieRath. Too short... lol.

Reviewer: NatalieRath Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/06/14 08:25 am Title: Gear 1 - The Silver Tick

TOO SHORT DANG IT!

Reviewer: masterwho Signed Report
Date: 11/04/14 03:44 am Title: Gear 1 - The Silver Tick

Interesting start. I want to see where you go with this

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 10/28/14 04:58 pm Title: Gear 1 - The Silver Tick

Interesting!

Reviewer: StephAD Signed Report
Date: 10/28/14 02:26 am Title: Gear 1 - The Silver Tick

Not bad, you would benefit from taking more time to describe the world. Other than that, you just have a couple grammatical and spelling mistakes.I would like to see more.

Author's Response: When I wrought it I thought there was more in it then I put in, I wright all my story's on a 3ds you see so it can make it hard sometimes, but thanks for the feed back. :)

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