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Reviewer: Yvonne Geymeier Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/21/15 07:18 am Title: chapter 1

Funny begin of the side story. I had to smile often while reading especially on Bobbies comment when Kim and Faye were going to school together :)

Reviewer: Artemesia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/03/14 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 3

Once again, I so admire your writing. I find most long stories a tad dreary after a bit and stop after they've served their purpose. But I just keep reading yours... And this last bit...pure bliss! Thanks so much for it - A

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm kind of working with what I call the Beef Stew Theory. I like stew, the way it often has a little bit of everything in it. And, to be honest, this has grown longer than I ever thought possible. Still having fun with it though. Glad you are, too. Bon Appetit Chefness

Reviewer: Kazumy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/27/14 03:49 am Title: chapter 1

Holy moley... talk about bitting the big end of the stick... or carefull for what you sk for...
so faye ina sense did a soul switch but used emotions to create it?

Author's Response: Remember... Thralls know what you want... Advocates know what you need. Coupled with the fact that she had no idea what she was doing. More soon... thanks... Bon Appetit. Chefness

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