Reviews For Shrooms
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Reviewer: JuliaGoldsmith Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 11/03/14 11:20 pm Title: Camping

You could have had something great here... it really is a shame that you can't continue. On what you have done, everything seems good except for the final chapter. It really is rushed. But you did a good job so with what we are given this is a 3/5.

Author's Response: I know what you mean, and it was rushed I just don't see when I would be able to pick it up so I just fixed that up. I rushed the end to my other story too which I think roadbandit knows lol but I just wanted to end it while I could, sorry for the disappointment :( maybe you could re do it for yourself or something I'm not fussed or I may pick it up when I have time.

Reviewer: masterwho Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/03/14 08:46 pm Title: Crazy

Not the strongest continuation of a great start.

Author's Response: Yeah so sorry about that, I didn't have any time to continue or a while so I ended it im sorry

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 11/03/14 04:45 pm Title: Camping

I hated the ending and that you cut it short,and you had a great idea for a story!

Author's Response: Yeah that's what I thought, but I haven't any time for a while so I thought I would leave it as that. I might pick it up in the future, I'm sorry guys

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 11/02/14 05:58 pm Title: Crazy

The story had so much promise and you killed it! Shame on you!

Author's Response: Haha sorry I hadn't the time so I cut it short I'm afraid. Why what was it you didn't like, the actually ending or how I've cut it short?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/30/14 08:28 pm Title: Changing

Wow great beginning , loving the story!

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