Date: 11/03/14 11:20 pm Title: Camping
You could have had something great here... it really is a shame that you can't continue. On what you have done, everything seems good except for the final chapter. It really is rushed. But you did a good job so with what we are given this is a 3/5.
Author's Response: I know what you mean, and it was rushed I just don't see when I would be able to pick it up so I just fixed that up. I rushed the end to my other story too which I think roadbandit knows lol but I just wanted to end it while I could, sorry for the disappointment :( maybe you could re do it for yourself or something I'm not fussed or I may pick it up when I have time.
Date: 11/03/14 04:45 pm Title: Camping
I hated the ending and that you cut it short,and you had a great idea for a story!
Author's Response: Yeah that's what I thought, but I haven't any time for a while so I thought I would leave it as that. I might pick it up in the future, I'm sorry guys