Date: 05/01/13 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Now, this is what I'm looking for. In fact, Mr. Alaska has made the makings of a fantastic female to male story, because one of the gals is gay, but Geraldine is not, and clearly is sexually stirred by the cute Tommy. Because Tommy saw Gerry half-naked, she things Tommy is a straight guy, etc.
It would be great if their first sexual encounter was in the dark, after a long petting in the car someplace. Not enough room in the back seat to find out, at least the first time, that Tommy is really a girl.
Date: 04/21/11 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
You can tell when an author is having fun with **the story** and not just plowing as quickly as possible through the exposition (if any) to get to 'the one-handed reading' bits. It's the 'author having fun with the story' kind of story I like - stories like this. Sequel? P-l-e-a-s-e?? (And I *still* don't particularly care for F-to-M.)