Date: 11/13/18 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 3 Outmaneuvered
This story is idiotic, and the writer obviously has no idea of how guardianship actually works.
Author's Response: Sorry you wasted your time. Keep looking. I'm sure you'll find dozens of stories here that you DO like.
Date: 02/15/16 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 9 Resigned
Wow well written story. I got stuck reading it till the end. I love how the main character was projected as an average looking girl instead of the magazine model like most of other writers does. Your approach are rather down to earth and realistically humble in my opinion and honestly I like it very much.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. Maybe you'll like some of my other stories.
Date: 01/05/15 07:30 am Title: Chapter 1 Caught
Excellent work. I like the way you left the remainder of her life to the readers imagination. The best part about this story in my opinion is the realism, too many works of fiction lack that nowadays, but you keep it there throughout. The entire story was rational and thoroughly thought through, I believe this allowed for the reader to better put themselves into Aly's shoes (or heels lol). All in all, I really liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you, Julia. Almost all my stories are based on fantasies I have. I know fantasies are just that, and you can do anything in them; for me, the more realistic you can make them, the hotter they are. When I take my time writing and re work anything that is just TOO far out, I'm much more pleased with the result. This sounds trite, but I truly am very happy when anyone discovers some of the same joy in reading my fantasies as I do in writhing them. But even then, I think I'd write them if I didn't have one single reader. I hope you'll take a glance at some of my other stories.
Date: 11/15/14 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1 Caught
Well, it just goes to show that some people settle for what's good enough rather than what's really good. Another excellent story Casey, and while I do still feel Aly has been shortchanged by life in the overall balance, it's good to see a realistic gender change story where the protagonist isn't drop-dead gorgeous and the ending isn't all kittens and rainbows. Well done for sticking to your guns.
Author's Response: Thank you. It's a fine line between wanting to write the ultimate fantasy and yet still be realistic.
Date: 11/13/14 10:39 am Title: Chapter 9 Resigned
I would marry him,I don't see the problem! Loving the story,excellent work as always.
Author's Response: I don't think she ever got over her unrealistic expectations. If the story continued, I believe she probably would be happy.
Date: 11/13/14 10:34 am Title: Chapter 9 Resigned
One has to ask one's self, is "The one true love" thought a myth perpetuated by the mind when the heart seems to already know? For Aly, Mike seems the right choice (at least at this point in time). I'm not sure if this is the ending Casey dear, but it's certainly a beginning, for Aly, of the rest of her life! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: I struggled with her feelings about him. It seemed to me that she always put such store on future happiness, like her inheritance, that she would do somewhat the same with him.
Date: 11/10/14 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 8 Courted
Oh, oh wow! That stings! Is it to late to sue Betsy yet?
Aly and Mike could work, but probably not, the age difference is just to great. I wonder, does Aly ever look up Pru to find out how she is? Ahh anyway, interesting turn of events in this one hon, more pwease? Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Talia, I originally had in mind for her to do just that, but then I realized that since she still had the same name as when she was male, it would cause all kinds of problems, so I decided to pass on that one.
Date: 11/10/14 02:39 am Title: Chapter 1 Caught
Will Aly hold out for what's good, or settle for the good enough?
Another excellent chapter, Casey. But boy, do I feel sorry for the poor girl.
Author's Response: In fiction, as in real life, things shouldn't always be rainbows and unicorns.
Date: 11/09/14 10:26 am Title: Chapter 1 Caught
Great story! =)
The way you write, the reader becomes part of the story which is probably why I was saddened by Bridget's death but this shows how powerful your writing is.
Also, in your latest chapter.... "He had been one of Betsy's patients"... did you mean one of Bridget's patients?
Other than that, really great story and character development. Hope it continues =)
Author's Response: Yep, should have been Bridget. And I even proofread it twice! I'm glad you enjoy the story.
Date: 11/07/14 02:52 am Title: Chapter 1 Caught
Poor Aly. After all she's been through, good and bad, she deserves better than this. And I'm pretty sure it's going to get worse still. Oh well...
Good writing as always Casey, but please give the poor girl a break...
Author's Response: Sometimes it gets worse before it gets better.
Date: 11/06/14 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 Caught
As always good stuff. I'm glad this isn't just wish fulfillment and she's having an ok life with some problems. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I think in too much TG fiction, everything is daffodils and unicorns. Real life always has a few stink bugs now and then.
Date: 11/06/14 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 7 Cast Adrift
I'm sad over Bridget's passing. I'd hopped Aly could of had more quality time with her. Paul's moving on comes as no surprise, but having a girl friend (Carol) to do girl things with is huge! Nice one Ms.Thompson! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Glad you're still liking it, sweetie.
Date: 11/04/14 03:39 am Title: Chapter 6 Sculpted
What was the ailment of which Bridget had suddenly taken a hold of her?
By the way, I find this a coincidence that your character's name Al and Ali should be the same as in my story. It's probably a good idea to put the all person's disclaimer if you're looking to be more professional. O:-D
Author's Response: Bridget's sickness is unnamed because the fact that she has it is more important than what she has. Not sure what all person's disclaimer is. One way I choose names is by using names of people I have known, normally ones with ambiguous names. I do like names that leave a little mystery about gender. That's how I chose my name Casey. Years and years ago, I knew a guy named Casey, and then a few years later, I saw Casey as a woman's name. My current favorite way to find names is to google names...top names...odd names...and choose from the lists. Again I tend to favor dual purpose names...Dakota, Madison, Taylor, etc If I remember correctly, for this story, I did none of this, but had run into an old friend named Allison, and so that name was floating around in my mind.
Date: 11/03/14 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 6 Sculpted
your imagery is very powerful and sensual. Thank-you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this comment. I truly try to work on my imagery. Some portions of all my stories have been rewritten and revised 5 or 6 times before my final proofread.
Date: 11/03/14 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 6 Sculpted
the whole chapter was a great one. This is what my dream would be like.
Author's Response: How I love this review. The fact that it spoke to your dream, your fantasy, as it did to one of my fantasies, makes writing these stories worthwhile.
Date: 11/03/14 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 6 Sculpted
Oh, oh, oh my!!!!! (Giggles Talia!). This one's full of emotion! Your an evil woman Ms.Thompson! My heart hurts now for Bridget. You know Aly's going to start wondering why the people she loves are always dyeing, or just going away, (like she figures Paul will when he's off to college)! I hope it doesn't effect her ability to love someone! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Love is going to be difficult for her.
Date: 10/30/14 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 5 Schooled
It is said that upwards of twenty percent of males would be sexually aroused if they were dressed up in woman's lingerie and clothing. Far fewer of actually seek it out. What a beautiful ending! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 10/30/14 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 Caught
His aunt is a bitch. Glad she's gone. Overall this is pretty good, about what I expect from you. As usual more conflict would be nice. Have a bully at school, a teacher who doesn't like him, etc, but there is the conflicted emotions so that's a nice improvement.
Author's Response: I really tend to prefer more inner conflict, but there is some other conflict later. Also I'm working on some new stories that contain more external conflict. Soon I'll be posting a continuation of the story Trapped, the one about the psychopath.
Date: 10/27/14 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1 Caught
I like your last two chapters. He's settling in nicely. I do hope he tries to rebel at least once in the future, but as a pampered guy who never had any real problems initially rolling over to the demands is fine.
Author's Response: I think he wants to, but doesn't really know how.
Date: 10/26/14 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 4 Intensified
"Looks like you found yourself a special boy." (Oops!)
And of course Bridget would spot it right away!
With Bridget being in the profession, I kind of expected the breast thing, but was surprised they didn't go any further. Nice build up so far Ms. Thompson! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 10/26/14 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 3 Outmaneuvered
Amazing what a little makeup can accomplish! A slightly older version of Pru! (OUCH!) That stung! That last line about 'Hello Kitty' had me giggles profusely! Nice one Casey! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: lol. Kind of proud of the Hello Kitty line myself.
Date: 10/25/14 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1 Caught
Another excellent story, Casey. I just love the way you keep it all rooted in reality, and the fact that Aly is, so far at least, an unremarkable girl, is a really nice touch. Looking forward to the next developments
Author's Response: Thank you. Most of the stories here are by nature fantasy, so the more realistic I can make them, the more compelling they are to me.
Date: 10/23/14 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 Caught
I'm agreeing with RoadBandit here. I also like how he's a very plain jane girl not a knock out. Realistic switch there.
Author's Response: By nature of the beast, TG fiction tends to be unrealistic. I think including as much realism as possible, like this or in a story I wrote where one of the main characters dies, makes the fantasy more vivid. When most of us imagine being turned into a female, we always picture some drop dead gorgeous babe. But what if we were just average? Food for thought.
Date: 10/18/14 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 Caught
Than you. Looking forward to more chapters.
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