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Reviewer: ElizahAT Signed Report
Date: 01/14/16 02:16 pm Title: Bus ride

Nicely done.

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/12/15 09:43 am Title: Bus ride

Not a bad story. You should rewrite this make it longer and a full story with lots of chapters

Reviewer: Karenv Signed Report
Date: 01/02/15 06:36 am Title: Bus ride

Very nice.

Reviewer: SD1987 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/26/14 09:17 am Title: Bus ride

I forgot to add a rating. 4 stars. :)

Reviewer: SD1987 Signed Report
Date: 09/26/14 09:16 am Title: Bus ride

Interesting story. I thought wouldn't it be interesting if Chris/Meagan now had to help Savannah and Zoe turn another boy into their sister.

Author's Response: Ya know, that's a pretty good idea. I'll have to add that in when i can edit it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Adam Cooper Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/26/14 01:48 am Title: Bus ride

A nicely written short story. It's sweet and full of enjoyment. I'll give you the advice I got when I first started on here, break the paragraphs up into more easily readable sentences. I usually do 3-4 lines then a white space. It just makes it easier to read. Anyway always nice to see new authors on here, liked your story, i give it a 4 because I prefer older characters and heard many stories like this before. But still a good short tale, keep writing and I look forward to reading more soon. x

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Sorry it was a bit odd with the placement. I was writing this on my tablet at night lol.

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