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Reviewer: Ole Ulfson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 08/03/12 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Thank you, Koz,

This was delightful and quite different from the first "Amy" story. In that first story I had the feeling you were trying to scratch a lightly felt, barely understood, itch. It was as though you had discerned it but only weakly defined it.

In this story, however you have given it form and substance and defined it; Given it full body! It was wonderful! In one delightful passage you show that it is our differences that unite us all in our needs:

...seemed to trigger a whole new way of thinking inside of her. At times it was a feeling of discontent, a feeling of not quite feeling whole coupled with a longing to fill that void. Yet at the same time it also felt like an incredible self-discovery, as if the all the pieces to a great puzzle, the puzzle of who she was, were laid out in front of her.

What a beautifully expressed explanation of what all of us, male or female, feel!

A marvelously written story,

Ole

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