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Reviewer: Towny365 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/26/14 04:52 pm Title: Epilogue

Amazing all the way through, great consistency and good end. You are grey at writing keep it up :)

Reviewer: sissy tracy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/25/14 06:51 am Title: Epilogue

I liked this story twist's and turn's galore. But in the end they where happy.

Reviewer: magisterb Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/21/14 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 7

Nicely written -- with a cast of characters that take the grand prize for foul-mouthedness. Please excuse me if I missed something, but I am still waiting for Mom to visit the Shaman

Reviewer: Towny365 Signed Report
Date: 09/21/14 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Very good start, love it so far! Looking forward to reading more :)

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/21/14 06:44 am Title: Chapter 7

Wow , awesome , can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed Report
Date: 09/19/14 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

What happened to this story? It has been somehow reset?

Author's Response: I'm reposting it, and all six chapters are up now.

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