Reviews For Butterfly Curse
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Reviewer: happyboy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/17/14 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good story can,t think how it can end should be interesring

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/16/14 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow great story. you need to write a sequel and/or a spinoff of another person.

Reviewer: Johanna Bender Signed starstar Report
Date: 09/16/14 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Some good moments, but the writing needs improvement in both grammar and description.

Reviewer: Ulysses Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/16/14 08:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting story. I like researching hypnosis, and I think this could be a process in which subliminal stimulation can occur while a person is in a medically-induced coma, undergoing a major transplantation in the near future.

Reviewer: sissy tracy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/15/14 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1

loved this story would you please continue with this

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